The story has some bullsh*t history tied to it and thats fine with me. The world development is pure and utter crap. The character have no depth whatsoever. The MC is too OP if your into that then it might be fine but for me it was bad. The currency exchange rate for in-game money is a load of horse ****. In my opinion the story has good potential if it has bit more depth and realism mixed into it. This is just my rant about the novel.
Kotario
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LIKEKotario:Thank you for your input, I’ll definitely try to do better going forward.
yo took that one on the chin like a champ. The guy may, or may not of had a point, but he portrayed it poorly and seemed like a c*nt.
Kotario:Thank you for your input, I’ll definitely try to do better going forward.
Honestly the rant was some constructive criticism but the way the guy portrayed his opinions was terrible. The author handled it amazingly though
WHAT_NO_MONEY:yo took that one on the chin like a champ. The guy may, or may not of had a point, but he portrayed it poorly and seemed like a c*nt.