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2021-03-16 03:33

I'm aware that there are many people who like slow burn and twists full of anguish and misunderstandings. This novel didn't make me satisfied due to serious points, which I will develop in my review. Mo Jingshen's nonexistent character development is extremely disappointing, we see for more than 200 chapters he is just being lenient towards Ji Nuan. There is nothing more thant being described through tons of paragraphs and paragraphs as competent, cold and handsome. Also, although Ji Nuan is almost 30 (considering the ten years since her divorce in the previous lifetime), she is very immature and poorly resolved. The past that she rejects so much from discussing, keeps interfering in her marriage at times, and despite that, she wastes every opportunity by endorsing this behavior with "confidence" in Mo Jingshen and a desire to live in the present. Also, the fact that the Ji family is declining and that Ji Nuan has never shown herself to be capable or skilled is a problem repeatedly pointed out by others. And yet, it doesn't make an effective investment in changing that outlook. Only using Mu Nuan Studio as an excuse for using the memories of 'old life'. This behavior is supported by more than 200 chapters and yet, we have not seen a relationship with a strong bond or connection. It's also strange that the author continues to describe Ji Nuan's 'rejection' of Mo Jingshen's sexual acts. She does not have an absolute position on this. The translation is clear and pleasant, however, the original writing does not pay for the investment of coins or passes. I believe that the story of the secondary characters is infinitely better, considering the behavior and background given as to their feelings. I won't go into the spoilers I know about their going to America and the incidents that happen there. Because, frankly, it's frustrating, I never shivered in anger as much as I did in this story. The tags and synopsis do not cover any information for the story to unfold. I lost 3 days of sleep to be received with this at the end of all. If anyone is interested in the spoilers link, I'm available to comment.

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Please give some spoilers of the ending .

KUMI
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You can just check the NU spoiler thread of the same name.

aojas4882:Please give some spoilers of the ending .
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You thought it's sweet but it's only a tip of an iceberg. Been scanning the raw and it's heartbreaking. Cambodia incidence is the start. After that, they'll undergo different challenges that are life threatening. It has something to do with rebirth, about changing the trajectory of life (?) WARNING!!! MAJOR SPOILER After the Cambodia, Su Zhilan used Su Xueyi to kill Ji Nuan in car accident but Mo Jisheng saved her life by sacrificing his. Ji Nuan had miscarriaged. Mo Jisheng was in coma for 2 months. And the moment MJ woke up, he proposed a divorce. He was cold. He did not rebirth but he remembered what happened 10 years ago. So he kept pushing JN, it's what she wants 10years ago. But our Ji Nuan is persistent. She kept on clinging to MJ, claiming that she'll never EVER divorce and will only be the MRS. MO. But... Ones patience is not forever... She was kidnapped but MJ only came 8 days later. JN felt that he no longer cared for her, that she's a troublesome. That he only saved her because of convenience. She was afraid. She was hurt. She lost her child. Now her husband is divorcing her. On the night MJ saved her when she was kidnapped, she was in MJ Study. She sat on his lap and DESPERATELT begs for him to just kiss him. But he pushed her hard, away. She staggered backwards and after that, she bent a pen, it means that was her last straw. She'll give up. She went to her office, focused on her work, did not return to Imperial Garden, she returned the key of MJ house near his office. She did not appear in his life. Days after, she was on the club with their employees to celebrate something. MJ was drunk and there's a woman who works on the club beside him, he let her go near him which he never allow before to any other woman. They had an argument but she still took him back to her room in the hotel. She help him 'cause he's drunk. no other intention. But MJ saw it as she's still clinging to him. JN was hurt. She made an ultimatum whether she leave or he leaves. MJ left... That night, JN was laying in the baththub. She did not come out of warm water in the thub because it was cold. The room airconditioner is also in the lowest temperature. She ended up sleeping in the bathub for 2 days? She was only discovered by MJ when their butler told him that she did not go home for 2 days. JN did not woke up for 2 to 3 days because of her weak body against the cold. She almost lost her life. She was so pale when she was found and all her veins were almost transparent from her skin. When she woke up, she signed the divorce paper. She went to UK for the development of her studio. She changed the name of the studio as well.. She did not go home for 3 years. In her 3 years, she experience ups and downs. But she became successful and was even in the list of Forbes. She came back as the President of MN Group. They met again through a series of business gatherings. MJ as the President of Mo Group and Shine that was combined 3yrs ago, and JN as President of MN Group. JN treat their meetings casually. She did not seemed affected. But MJ is. He still loved her. He has his reason for pushing her away. And I think that is to avoid her death. But... After many months, they became okay. I'll skip how. But they're almost reconciled and after their business work, they're planning to go home to Imperial Garden. MJ told JN to go home first. (She went to LA to follow MJ when he did not return and not answering her calls.) but JN insist to stay because she'll be worried when they're away from each other knowing that their enemies from Cambodia reappeared. But MJ also has the same reason. He'll not worry when JN was not in LA. So in the end, she went home. But again, JN was kidnapped, took the bullet for MJ. Because she'd rather die than MJ save her life again. Besides, she's happy dying because she's not alone this time. She woke up months(?) after. She cannot remember anything. She has a brain like that of 7 or 9 yrs old...

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