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2020-05-26 19:31

At first it was an interesting rebirth story and I got that the ML was designed to be doting, however 101 chapters in and I really wonder what time he has to run his own company let alone eventually take over the main family business shine; the FL is meant to be clever, educated, with years of experience from her previous life, but every 2 seconds she keeps easily falling into schemes and needing to be rescued by the ML, it become nauseating... And dont get me started with the love making ridiculousness, she has been married in 2 life times and yet every time they get intimate she is portrayed as a some kind of born again virgin who is to shy to be touched and needs to be forced, even though the guy is apparently an Adonis that every female would drop their panties for in an instant 🙄its as if sex it a bad thing and he is the only one who enjoys it, has the writer never heard of the female orgasm?

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You thought it's sweet but it's only a tip of an iceberg. Been scanning the raw and it's heartbreaking. Cambodia incidence is the start. After that, they'll undergo different challenges that are life threatening. It has something to do with rebirth, about changing the trajectory of life (?) WARNING!!! MAJOR SPOILER After the Cambodia, Su Zhilan used Su Xueyi to kill Ji Nuan in car accident but Mo Jisheng saved her life by sacrificing his. Ji Nuan had miscarriaged. Mo Jisheng was in coma for 2 months. And the moment MJ woke up, he proposed a divorce. He was cold. He did not rebirth but he remembered what happened 10 years ago. So he kept pushing JN, it's what she wants 10years ago. But our Ji Nuan is persistent. She kept on clinging to MJ, claiming that she'll never EVER divorce and will only be the MRS. MO. But... Ones patience is not forever... She was kidnapped but MJ only came 8 days later. JN felt that he no longer cared for her, that she's a troublesome. That he only saved her because of convenience. She was afraid. She was hurt. She lost her child. Now her husband is divorcing her. On the night MJ saved her when she was kidnapped, she was in MJ Study. She sat on his lap and DESPERATELT begs for him to just kiss him. But he pushed her hard, away. She staggered backwards and after that, she bent a pen, it means that was her last straw. She'll give up. She went to her office, focused on her work, did not return to Imperial Garden, she returned the key of MJ house near his office. She did not appear in his life. Days after, she was on the club with their employees to celebrate something. MJ was drunk and there's a woman who works on the club beside him, he let her go near him which he never allow before to any other woman. They had an argument but she still took him back to her room in the hotel. She help him 'cause he's drunk. no other intention. But MJ saw it as she's still clinging to him. JN was hurt. She made an ultimatum whether she leave or he leaves. MJ left... That night, JN was laying in the baththub. She did not come out of warm water in the thub because it was cold. The room airconditioner is also in the lowest temperature. She ended up sleeping in the bathub for 2 days? She was only discovered by MJ when their butler told him that she did not go home for 2 days. JN did not woke up for 2 to 3 days because of her weak body against the cold. She almost lost her life. She was so pale when she was found and all her veins were almost transparent from her skin. When she woke up, she signed the divorce paper. She went to UK for the development of her studio. She changed the name of the studio as well.. She did not go home for 3 years. In her 3 years, she experience ups and downs. But she became successful and was even in the list of Forbes. She came back as the President of MN Group. They met again through a series of business gatherings. MJ as the President of Mo Group and Shine that was combined 3yrs ago, and JN as President of MN Group. JN treat their meetings casually. She did not seemed affected. But MJ is. He still loved her. He has his reason for pushing her away. And I think that is to avoid her death. But... After many months, they became okay. I'll skip how. But they're almost reconciled and after their business work, they're planning to go home to Imperial Garden. MJ told JN to go home first. (She went to LA to follow MJ when he did not return and not answering her calls.) but JN insist to stay because she'll be worried when they're away from each other knowing that their enemies from Cambodia reappeared. But MJ also has the same reason. He'll not worry when JN was not in LA. So in the end, she went home. But again, JN was kidnapped, took the bullet for MJ. Because she'd rather die than MJ save her life again. Besides, she's happy dying because she's not alone this time. She woke up months(?) after. She cannot remember anything. She has a brain like that of 7 or 9 yrs old...

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