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scarle1Lv55yr
2019-08-27 07:39

I like the story and the movement of the plot line. He got the system - Yes Completing missions -Yes Slow development - yes (probably because of chapter length is small) World development - No (hardly say anything about the place he live in. is it still earth or other?) character - under developed My only con of this story is MC character. He was doing odd jobs in university to do the living, suddenly ine day he got the system and become studious I can accept that but this also changes his character as a whole he become completely emotionless unless author want to create some comedic moment, he looks down on his friends for playing games and stuff like normal college students do (which he also do before system). one instance in recent chapter (as of ch. 122) he looks down on a Indian guy in princeton (whose friendly to mc) for doing some calculation error laughs on him saying wasting his funding coming all the way to princeton. In some sense without system MC would be passing down flyers in streets while that Indian guy even with calculation error is genuinely genius doing his presentation in princeton using reverse mathematics which no one uses even author agreed upon. All in all I want is MC should have some sense in the way he treats the people around and not act as guy whot billions in lottery and become a complete douchebag. And for Author please do not make stereotypes of all westerners you know. By reading this novel I know you are patriotic and thats good for you but MC is not you and you didn't set any consistent worldback ground to MC have a biased view other than using same same on earth. My overall impression : 2.8/5. This doesn't mean I don't recommend reading it but take it with a grain of salt.

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He laughs at the Indian guy because he made a simple mistake, I like how the author specifically dialogues the Indian to say a long the lines of “they don’t listen to me because they are racist”. While the main character points out the fatal mistake.

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