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kojimamiharu
kojimamiharuLv115yr
2019-10-13 00:15

This might be a bit long 🤓 The FL is not someone you meet in other webnovels. She has realistic character and cute straightforward demeanor you'll see in today's society, and this is considered a unique mixture between ancient chinese background (i suppose) and millenials story. I can't help laughing about Senja's action and also Tianyao's (i hope i wrote in right) reaction. Furthermore: • You'll find the novel is easy to read despite of minor grammar error (it does'nt bother me at all though) • The scenes are flowing, the way author describes everything really turns me on to read more and more and more. I can easily imagine what kind of scene is happening in every chapter which is kind of rare to find in this webnovel universe. • Although some details is not quite fit, the way author let the story goes is worthy to be appraised, he/she's able to draw our intention to the book. It's a nice talent i think • I haven't finished reading this book, since I'm such a low-budget student, so everything I can do is just log in everyday, and (force my self to) satisfy my daily supply of Senja and Tianyao little by little. But i can assure you, the SS price is totally reasonable. Approximately around 3-6SS per chapter, and you won't be dissapointed in each purchases. • Finally to conclude this review; YOU WILL LOVE IT! It's been a while since I lost my interest in reading webnovel's ebook after Ning Xi's and duo buns ended, but this novel DEFINITELY draws my attention and amazement. Can't wait to finish it! That's all from me, giving you a hug from Indonesia, thor ❤ Hope I can read your other masterpieces ❤❤❤

Purple Dawn Till Dusk : dearest through the time

jikanyotomare
4.5
549 Chs

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jikanyotomare
jikanyotomareAuthor

hiii, author here... i would like to shamelessly give myself 5 stars. cough... well, like wise men say, you should proud of whatever you do... i would like to thanks everyone who give the effort to read this story and if you don't mind, could you please leave me a review or comments, i would love to read it. i would quotes what minions said. "I'm not addicted to reading, i can quit as soon as i finish one more chapter" cheer readers^^

6yr

QingChuanChuan101
QingChuanChuan101Lv5

I really love this story....but the reason why i gave it 4 stars was that the ML already has a son, it would have been fine if he had a wife before but it was just i don't like one of the main characters having their children with another.

6yr
AK_1
AK_1Lv6

I give it full marks... Here the author is learning n improving and trying to provide a good story. I suggest if you don't read the novel completely and just depend on mistakes in synopsis then don't review!! "U R Not Eligible to Review" or Comment in such a way that encourages Author!! This is my first Novel Review in webnovel and am happy to review this Novel. As the author is well aware of his/her mistakes and working on it, I wish author Good Luck..👍🙂 Dear author, the story is good and interesting, keep up the good work. 🙂

6yr
StenDuring
StenDuringLv5

Reveal spoiler

6yr
PoppyQueen
PoppyQueenLv4

I really like your story, however, I spotted some grammatical mistakes through the text which sort of diverted my attention from the story(I have the same issues in my story. Kind of trying to correct them bit by bit). Other than that, your story is almost impeccable.

6yr
Ouhbaba
OuhbabaLv6

I lost brain cells just from reading the synopsis. Come on Author, at least try to make me believe that maybe you put some effort into it...

6yr
2loveu
2loveuLv5

If you don't want to read a spoiled, glutton and a good-for-nothing female protagonist skip this one and find another. You'll be dissapointed if you do

6yr
QCY
QCYLv5

Wow. I'm pretty surprised there are actually upvoted reviews that I actually agree with talking (in general) about the issues of books written by amateurs and people unfamiliar to English. The writing quality and character development are all over the place, which I've noticed in multiple Original novels and has seriously quite a few of my brain cells. In fact, I've been quite dissatisfied with the whole "write your own novel" thing on this website because a ton of books (like every single one) really didn't meet proper quality and came out just to kill the brains of people who read it. I used to like this website due to the fact that it only featured translated novels (which are in fact, are edited), but with that new update, the quality of this website has dropped down by a whole lot.

5yr
Ji_Yidao
Ji_YidaoLv14

I'm sorry but... What??? The grammar and typos make this so hard to read. Granted it's not as bad as MTL but as a novel in general it's pretty awful. Other than that the novel is average at best.

6yr
king_z
king_zLv11

i just finish reading the last chapter and i thought i will give it a try to this novel, the story develop with slow pace but it make me more understand point of view the MC... i hope the author didn't drop the novel.

6yr
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