Review Detail of FujiCigarette in Training Pokemon

Writing Quality 2.5 - readable but need an editor/proofreader Stability of updates 3 - posted december 27th as of now 19 chapters which is slow, but its a fanfic so average rating Story Development 4- is great, i like it very much Character Design 3- should have rated it higher but as of now there are only 2 original characters mc and pokemon. good thing though as author is trying to keep away from writing about canon characters. World background 4 - its the pokeman world, with a twist and for me a good twist by the author. gripe i have with this is that i dont really like to read about depressed mc's that much so i am hoping that the depression will get solved in the future. as of now there aint that much battles the bread and butter of pokemon, and pacing seems slow but still liking it, also grammar needs to be touched up. i like the charm it has, makes it feel very pokemon with friendship and family and such i like the system very much, not very powerful at the start, but has immense game breaking potential which is a plus, makes it feel like youre growing along with the mc and his pokemon makes for a nice daydream like immersion. i maybe biased on my review on this even if my rating for this is slow, its a novel im looking forward to. low rating is there because i dont give perfect scores everytime i review... try to be realistic here. you may like something, but dont be blind to its flaws.