The overall quality of the book could use some improvement. While it was comprehensible, the plot itself was plain in the fact that it follows a cliche plot without providing any twists, that usually come with such plot-lines. There were also grammar errors, which were irksome to read without feeling frustrated. Also, the characters themselves were poorly developed, which made it hard for me feel any emotions for any of them, such as love or hate. Some of the actions taken by the characters could have been reasonable if there were more details and backgrounds provided. More description and detail could be provided as well a grammar checks to make this a better story to read. A good thing to keep in mind is “show, not tell” because we can all tell things, but that would take out all the fun and excitement readers get from reading a book.
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Thank you for your comments. I will take on board what you have had to say, however while at an early stage character development may seem poor, there are layers to each of our main characters. Rather than rushing out the issues the first few chapters (even though it is only over some days in the novel), we get to see a slower development and the issues come out that explain much. Please have patience in reading, and as this happens the layers will be revealed.
Thats exactly what i want to happen in this book "show not tell".🤔
Thanks 🍎-Chan! I’m glad we share the same opinion☺️👍🏻
Yeha even i felt same. But after gradually going through the chapter I found it more interesting.
At start it was boring and tiring bit when I read more I was amaze
At start it was boring and tiring bit when I read more I was amaze
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