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GioJess
GioJessLv146yr
2019-01-12 02:34

Seems like an interesting storyline. Although the storyline a bit like some stories from WebNovel. Hopefully the author or translater can put more chapters up. Preferable 3 to 5 chapters per day.

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klmorgan
4.3
731 Chs

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klmorgan
klmorganAuthor

HI. I would love to do more chapters, but I work full time, so this is a hobby for me. However, presently I can still sustain 2 chapters per day, and will continue to do so why I can. I will be offering bonus chapters at the end of the month if certain challenges are met, so I will be saving some chapters for that.

6yr
Uni_Chan
Uni_ChanLv2

It seems like you're really addicted to this novel

5yr
Uni_Chan
Uni_ChanLv2

It seems like you're really addicted to this novel

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Uni_Chan
Uni_ChanLv2

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Uni_Chan
Uni_ChanLv2

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Uni_Chan
Uni_ChanLv2

It seems like you're really addicted to this novel

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Uni_Chan
Uni_ChanLv2

It seems like you're really addicted to this novel

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Uni_Chan
Uni_ChanLv2

It seems like you're really addicted to this novel

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Uni_Chan
Uni_ChanLv2

It seems like you're really addicted to this novel

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Uni_Chan
Uni_ChanLv2

It seems like you're really addicted to this novel

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Snowmeenah
SnowmeenahLv4

Though this book is a romantic novel but please writer it lacks emotion that will make you eager to read more and you explain so much including things that doesn't need to be expain. Lack of emotion like how it feels when they are faking romance etc. Even though the book is good but it became boring with time and to me this is due to lack of expressing their deep emotion in other to capture the attention of the reader. Hope you will improve and make some possible changes. Thank you

5yr
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Junnoyao0606
Junnoyao0606Lv4

Be patient and read atleat 20chapters,then comment.story may have some similarities,even I lost interest by reading earlier comments.they r idiots.this story is damn good..very beautiful story.everyone must try it. to author: u need an editor seriously, i may be not so good in English but i still find some grammatical errors nd sentence construction error. it would be great if u can describe nature,wind , sunset,smell of rain etc rather giving fillar sentences

6yr

AndrewSirr
AndrewSirrLv4

Very confusing story and the writing quality is not very good. Well it's normal for ******* author's but the problem is author keeps repeating lines and stuffs again and again. Each chapter starts from the previous chapters last sentence which is very irritating for me to read. Moreover, the paragraphs and conversation between characters are so long and detailed that I feel like it's not some adults conversation rather, preschool kids. Further more, the concept isn't original since I have already read countless of same plot eg: Trial Marriag, so please don't write details stuffs, though the ONLY positive side is the FL is a foreigner rather than a Chainese ( sorry for spoiling this part). Overall I am giving 3•8 even though I am giving up this story (for the first time in my life in WN), but you tried your best writing it and the stability of updates is far better than other novels. Well done. *I advise you to backtrack your previous chapters and try to edit it. Use space and enters and make the dialogue short. Moreover, Don't start your chapter with the previous chapter's last para.

6yr
bebel
bebelLv6

I love this novel!!!!!! You became addicted to this, every day I wait to read new chapters!! You won’t regret reading this !!! I love this couple and the plot of the novel

6yr
Chouko
ChoukoLv5

The overall quality of the book could use some improvement. While it was comprehensible, the plot itself was plain in the fact that it follows a cliche plot without providing any twists, that usually come with such plot-lines. There were also grammar errors, which were irksome to read without feeling frustrated. Also, the characters themselves were poorly developed, which made it hard for me feel any emotions for any of them, such as love or hate. Some of the actions taken by the characters could have been reasonable if there were more details and backgrounds provided. More description and detail could be provided as well a grammar checks to make this a better story to read. A good thing to keep in mind is “show, not tell” because we can all tell things, but that would take out all the fun and excitement readers get from reading a book.

6yr
Qob
QobLv6

The story has potential but the writing is holding it back. Things keep being repeated over and over and take up way too many chapters. There is no need to keep repeated incidents in detail to every character. At this point it just feels like repetition is to make up for the word count. In addition, the court/law stuff goes too much into detail. I never thought too much detail was bad but after reading the chapters I realized that too much detail would lead the chapters to become boring and make you lose interest. I have honestly been skimming through chapters just because some things get dragged on for 5+ chapters. At this point I’m losing interest in the story itself.

6yr
bingky
bingkyLv15

Reveal spoiler

6yr
bee123
bee123Lv4

I think this book is not my cup of tea.... 1.some characters are very unreasonable(as every character action should be based on when,why,how ,what etc) but is it totally let the characters out without any strings attached. A world can have at most 2 characters that are unreasonable bt nt the whole world as it doesnt suit logic 2.Even though a character is described as intelligent and powerful but writer has protrayed them as dumbos nt in one bt most situations 3. Its like I am reading some law book not some novel In short u can only look at this book if u have interest in law and legal things otherwise its a headache as except few chapters mostly it involves only around that as far as I have read

5yr
PurplePoohBear
PurplePoohBearLv15

The characters are not well developed because the author spends too much time on legal procedures and repetitive descriptions, while ignoring the inner life that is supposed to be developing in and between the characters. The author doesn't use foreshadowing very well. While I can tell Spellcheck has been used, it is obvious that no one is reading through to make sure that the words used are the correct words that the author intended, which I find surprising for someone who is a lawyer (author). I made it to chapter 111 and couldn't take it anymore. I don't know why this was pick as a premium title. Don't waste your power stones, imho.

6yr
Chinita_M
Chinita_MLv11

Nice story but author please stop going in circles with long speeches,,sorry but it somehow tends to get boring.no chance to leave any comment,totally frustrating.you've given the female lead no strength and male lead is somehow confused(just my opinion don't kill me)..make them the ultimate power couple after the hospital.let her fight,not just tremble and cry and get slapped or beaten up every time.its depressing and as a woman it brings bad memories to me.you're supposed to empower us not take some of us back to past terrible experiences.its a nice story you just need to up your game,,cut on the long conversations with no meaning

6yr
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