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Indie131998Author2mthIndie131998

I'm not sure if this is the stupidest thing to pull off, but reviewing my own book... I had the opportunity to read this as a spectator to refresh my memories, writing this book a few years ago, I gotta say some of the negative reviews maybe true, you'll probably drop this book around chapter 15+ or 28 or some other points. I don't blame you, the chapter 15+ point has an explanation post 150chaps, the 28 point is just the truth being revealed and its a personal decision for me as a writer. In all fairness, the next few things I'm gonna write is about my view as a reader of this book from the middle say after chapter 90+ to refresh my mind, so it's a half assed review but bear with me. Looking at this book from a new perspective, I've quite enjoyed my journey, I've had fun laughing out loud, getting excited about the stuff that happens post chapter 90. It's pretty interesting. Some parts I'll admit I downright hated it, the flashbacks were repetitive as fuck nad some places the scene changing, moving focus to another character's situation is pretty bad and breaks immersion, so I'll be changing that as I write from Chapter 196 onwards. the inter character relationships, the dynamics retaining the characters as they are from the original series, its pretty fun to explore knowing they are made to fit into the current scenario surrounding the plot progression. For example, Minato sucking at naming stuff, Deidara's speech pattern and obsession with art, The first Hokage's reactions, there's a lot to be said, but it'll be a spoiler. One thing I can guarantee is that this novel is truly unlike most fanfics out there, so do give it a try. It's pretty engaging especially around the second part of the Chunin exam onwards where the pace of the story quickens a lot, with a ton of action happening. Imo, I have given this novel a fair rating and most likely people with agree with my rating as is. Writing Quality - 4/5 Stability of Updates - 1/5 Story Development - 4/5 Character Design - 5/5 World Background - 5/5

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this review is from Chapter 64 onwards, but rates the entire book as a whole