thanks, just a change of mind and pace so i can deal with real life stuff

sure no problem, i shouldnbe able to put out a chapter within a day... just a bit busy

well, i won't blame you if you drop it

nah the whole story around kawaki is yet to end, I've imagined an end with him dying for a good cause, not betrayal or anything... I'll leave that upto future chapters tho

That's the premise, but things diverge a lot starting from the chunin exams arc. There's a chance you'll drop this around chapter 15+ or 28, but I guarantee things are going to be super interesting during the training and the rescue mission arc, so hold on until then if ye can [img=coins]

this review is from Chapter 64 onwards, but rates the entire book as a whole

added now

btw 2 new chaps are out

this chapter was mostly a flashback again, but next ones on its gonna go back to being original. blame sleeping shu cos he didn't transfer memories.

its not completed tho, will need another 20chaps or so.

i know almost the entire chapter was a flashback with another added flashback, but its the interaction between the characters as is in the story. so I hope people understand the interaction is more important here.

I'm not sure if this is the stupidest thing to pull off, but reviewing my own book... I had the opportunity to read this as a spectator to refresh my memories, writing this book a few years ago, I gotta say some of the negative reviews maybe true, you'll probably drop this book around chapter 15+ or 28 or some other points. I don't blame you, the chapter 15+ point has an explanation post 150chaps, the 28 point is just the truth being revealed and its a personal decision for me as a writer. In all fairness, the next few things I'm gonna write is about my view as a reader of this book from the middle say after chapter 90+ to refresh my mind, so it's a half assed review but bear with me. Looking at this book from a new perspective, I've quite enjoyed my journey, I've had fun laughing out loud, getting excited about the stuff that happens post chapter 90. It's pretty interesting. Some parts I'll admit I downright hated it, the flashbacks were repetitive as fuck nad some places the scene changing, moving focus to another character's situation is pretty bad and breaks immersion, so I'll be changing that as I write from Chapter 196 onwards. the inter character relationships, the dynamics retaining the characters as they are from the original series, its pretty fun to explore knowing they are made to fit into the current scenario surrounding the plot progression. For example, Minato sucking at naming stuff, Deidara's speech pattern and obsession with art, The first Hokage's reactions, there's a lot to be said, but it'll be a spoiler. One thing I can guarantee is that this novel is truly unlike most fanfics out there, so do give it a try. It's pretty engaging especially around the second part of the Chunin exam onwards where the pace of the story quickens a lot, with a ton of action happening. Imo, I have given this novel a fair rating and most likely people with agree with my rating as is. Writing Quality - 4/5 Stability of Updates - 1/5 Story Development - 4/5 Character Design - 5/5 World Background - 5/5

you probably didn't read well then.

I'm back, for a bit.

I'll have to come up with an interesting story for that, problem is, most of my ideas are being centered around the current animes/mangas and cultivation stuff... Thinking if I should create some kinda interesting short story... goes like this we may not be able to go to the past, but we could change someone's future. Tsukushima an average salary man takes the same bus back home as Tsukune and shin, both boys in junior High school. Hearing their everyday convos, one day tsukushima decides to step up, approaches the boys and says to tsukune, "I'm you from the future, and I'm here to change our life" Just some random thoughts lol.

Sup bro, it's been a while. I still remember your pfp lol, nice to see you havent changed it, else I'll be having a hard time recognising you. How you doin bro?

hmm

I'm probably back, I'll try picking up something in a few hours thanks for reading

never expected three comments within a few hours.... wooo!! I might just get back to writing... Now, I'll have to refresh my memories of this novel lol I'll see if I can get some reading done and try to pump out a chapter

I'VE WAITED FOR THIS CHAPTERRRRR When's the next upload????