Well, the story is pretty decent, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read and I'll continue reading it till you finish it. A couple of complains: idk if anyone have the same problem but at least for me the structure of the dialogs kinda breaks the flow, if the dialogs were in the same paragraph would be a little more comfortable, even more when a lot of people are talking at the same time. Other thing is that you rely on our previous knowledge of Naruto, yeah a lot of people get what are you trying to illustrate but others would need to open the wiki to search the things that are happening. Anyway, I'm not a native speaker so my English can be a little rough but I hope you understand what I meant
Indie131998
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LIKEThanks, for your review Please let me know once again when you have reached the end. As you have noticed over chapter 30 and beyond, I have improved my structure and writing to a certain extent, so I would like to hear from you once again when you have caught up. I am not a native english speaker myself, nor do I have enough time to improve my writing techniques, But I do my best with whatever I've got to provide the best possible writing experience I can ever provide.