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GoddessOfFood
GoddessOfFoodLv56yr
2019-01-22 21:10

Well I must say this is the best Naruto fanfic I found in qidian so far. What I like about the story is that the author respected the canon. All the characters are just like in the original naruto. I've read a lot of naruto fanfic and let me tell you, most of the authors like to butcher the canon. I don't want Naruto to become arrogant horny MC like in other fanfic and all the kages and jonin turned into retards and take advice from a 5 year old kid. What I envision is the same Naruto but since Naruto already knew the future, he will try to erase his past regrets and save his loved ones. And I hope the author will emphasize more on the relationship and interaction between characters. Their relationship is superficial and not that detailed in the manga since it's a shounen. So I hope I can satisfy my fangirl heart with this novel. Well that's just my wish. You can just write whatever you want For the pacing just take it slow. You don't need to rush the plot and you can even add fillers in between. You can finish the chunin exam in chapter 200 for all I care. The only complain about the writing is author tends to add multiple scenes into a chapter. Switching between scenes in a chapter will destroy the readers immersion. Just focus on one character at a time. We readers doesn't have short term memory lost so we wouldn't forget about the other characters if you did not give them screen time for few chapters. Overall a solid read. And the update rate is consistent. My only hope is for the author to finish this novel and not dropping it like 99% of the originals out there.

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Indie131998
Indie131998Author

I will not drop it. Though, it might take a long time to finish it in my case.

Ramius
RamiusLv13

Like +1

MovingCorpse
MovingCorpseLv7

Flashback +1

inuhashimra
inuhashimraLv4

Food goddess 👍👍👍👍

TigerBlooImmortal
TigerBlooImmortalLv15

I hate fillers especially between fights,it just drags it on and makes it annoying

Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

That's the whole point in it being "Fan Fiction" ofcourse they will change it to suit their taste and fantasy. In this case of this and what you described it can hardly be called a fanfic if everything is basically the same as the original.

SD_Liv
SD_LivLv4

This is a harem (Or will there just be minor amendments?)

Indie131998:I will not drop it. Though, it might take a long time to finish it in my case.
DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4

☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.

SD_Liv:This is a harem (Or will there just be minor amendments?)
CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv5

Liar, you dropped it in the end....

Indie131998:I will not drop it. Though, it might take a long time to finish it in my case.
Savvage_Grimm
Savvage_GrimmLv12

Liessssss

Indie131998:I will not drop it. Though, it might take a long time to finish it in my case.
UwU_M0MMY_MILK3R
UwU_M0MMY_MILK3RLv4

Does that mean Naruto is the same orange wearing retard

Reymond_Ferin
Reymond_FerinLv12

he dropped it, a lier it has been 2 years since he dropped itI hate such writters it was just a waste of timeI followed this story thought he won't drop ithe could atleast upload one chapter a week I was not going to be so tough

DanzoSlayer
DanzoSlayerLv4

Can you give me the Chinese name

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