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The_25th_Night
The_25th_NightLv46yr
2018-12-22 22:42

This is an excellent work.. The plot basis is very solid... If the writing style could be changed a bit...it will go to the top of the rankings... Anyway, Author-san, I wish you good luck and am very excited for your work.

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Indie131998
Indie131998Author

light-kun, please give me an updated review bro, I like reading reviews like yours

The_25th_Night
The_25th_NightLv4

You got it

Indie131998:light-kun, please give me an updated review bro, I like reading reviews like yours
Indie131998
Indie131998Author

I like it man, i am going to select this as part of the three reviews.

The_25th_Night:You got it
Indie131998
Indie131998Author

Oh and Good Luck on your exams

The_25th_Night:You got it
The_25th_Night
The_25th_NightLv4

Wai...do you read my stuff? *heavy Breathing*

Indie131998:Oh and Good Luck on your exams
Indie131998
Indie131998Author

Just read bro, not the new book though, I don't really have time for that one yet.

The_25th_Night:Wai...do you read my stuff? *heavy Breathing*
Indie131998
Indie131998Author

on my book, i have seen three to four users writing their own novels so yeah

The_25th_Night:Wai...do you read my stuff? *heavy Breathing*
The_25th_Night
The_25th_NightLv4

Gee thanks. Anyway man, you're doing an awesome job... Keep going buddy

Indie131998:on my book, i have seen three to four users writing their own novels so yeah
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GoddessOfFood
GoddessOfFoodLv5

Well I must say this is the best Naruto fanfic I found in qidian so far. What I like about the story is that the author respected the canon. All the characters are just like in the original naruto. I've read a lot of naruto fanfic and let me tell you, most of the authors like to butcher the canon. I don't want Naruto to become arrogant horny MC like in other fanfic and all the kages and jonin turned into retards and take advice from a 5 year old kid. What I envision is the same Naruto but since Naruto already knew the future, he will try to erase his past regrets and save his loved ones. And I hope the author will emphasize more on the relationship and interaction between characters. Their relationship is superficial and not that detailed in the manga since it's a shounen. So I hope I can satisfy my fangirl heart with this novel. Well that's just my wish. You can just write whatever you want For the pacing just take it slow. You don't need to rush the plot and you can even add fillers in between. You can finish the chunin exam in chapter 200 for all I care. The only complain about the writing is author tends to add multiple scenes into a chapter. Switching between scenes in a chapter will destroy the readers immersion. Just focus on one character at a time. We readers doesn't have short term memory lost so we wouldn't forget about the other characters if you did not give them screen time for few chapters. Overall a solid read. And the update rate is consistent. My only hope is for the author to finish this novel and not dropping it like 99% of the originals out there.

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