Well I must say this is the best Naruto fanfic I found in qidian so far. What I like about the story is that the author respected the canon. All the characters are just like in the original naruto. I've read a lot of naruto fanfic and let me tell you, most of the authors like to butcher the canon. I don't want Naruto to become arrogant horny MC like in other fanfic and all the kages and jonin turned into retards and take advice from a 5 year old kid. What I envision is the same Naruto but since Naruto already knew the future, he will try to erase his past regrets and save his loved ones. And I hope the author will emphasize more on the relationship and interaction between characters. Their relationship is superficial and not that detailed in the manga since it's a shounen. So I hope I can satisfy my fangirl heart with this novel. Well that's just my wish. You can just write whatever you want For the pacing just take it slow. You don't need to rush the plot and you can even add fillers in between. You can finish the chunin exam in chapter 200 for all I care. The only complain about the writing is author tends to add multiple scenes into a chapter. Switching between scenes in a chapter will destroy the readers immersion. Just focus on one character at a time. We readers doesn't have short term memory lost so we wouldn't forget about the other characters if you did not give them screen time for few chapters. Overall a solid read. And the update rate is consistent. My only hope is for the author to finish this novel and not dropping it like 99% of the originals out there.

Everyone that know naruto and likes it can be really happy with this fan fic but be aware..... 40 % of the naruto series is filler.... In a fan fic that is authentic to the original you should not be annoyed by flashbacks. If you are easily ... Then stay away.... The Fan fiction ist the best of the naruto universe that I've ever read and I know about 40 or 50 different ones.... Well... In conclusion this fan fic from indie is not only on qidian the best but even compared with fan.fiction.com I LIKE IT THE WAY INDIE WRITES IT. And no one can stop him!!! Or I will come for you

Well, the story is pretty decent, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read and I'll continue reading it till you finish it. A couple of complains: idk if anyone have the same problem but at least for me the structure of the dialogs kinda breaks the flow, if the dialogs were in the same paragraph would be a little more comfortable, even more when a lot of people are talking at the same time. Other thing is that you rely on our previous knowledge of Naruto, yeah a lot of people get what are you trying to illustrate but others would need to open the wiki to search the things that are happening. Anyway, I'm not a native speaker so my English can be a little rough but I hope you understand what I meant

This is one of the most stable and excellent works I'm reading right now. For people looking for a Naruto fan-fic, I suggest this as a must read. The characters, world building and plot are fully attention grabbing and so whole that, you can actually imagine it all happening. The writing style and chapter quality are great and hence, I recommend this as a must read!

Not ever imagined that I would read naruto with same excitement as I used to in teenage. Enjoying this version with same excitement. Naruto recarnate. Sasuke become sage. Sakura useless as always😁. Happy

This take on the Naruto franchise is quite interesting. The time travel to improve the future aspect is compelling so far. The characters themselves are close enough to their canon counterparts to feel like Naruto. It has been an enjoyable read thus far with stable updates. There are only a few plot points that are not personally appealing to me but that might change in the future. Overall a great work.

The author is very accessable and write in a mostly unplanned flow. This allows him to listen to his fans rather than just continue marching on while peeps drop the story. Sentence structure and grammar is decent (making it top quality on this platform), but word choice often leaves something to be desired. Theme exploration is pretty shallow in favor of a moving plot, and I feel that is a shame seeing as we are dealing with a god-amongst-us protagonist. There is character growth but not much in the means of character arcs. The premise is Ooh La La by Faces, so go listen to that song and if you feel it resonate you may enjoy the plot after the author scrubbed some initial hesitance at the request of the fans. That ability to stow his ego and adapt to his audience is the authors strongest aspect.

Wow !! This novel is getting better and better as well as interesting 😍 !! I really hope this novel doesnt stop midway and continues on with same momentum whether novel goes premium or not !! GOOD LUCK ☺ Indie131998

The MC tells everyone he's from the future in chapter 28. I don't know who is interested in reading this. But judging by the reviews of strange people a lot

When will be the next episode...I hate it when you delay..I want this story to animate too..will that happen!?.. Concentrate more on Hinata Naruto interactions..and Naruto neji interaction so that neji would protect him in the war and die letting naruhina stronger...and Sasuke is poor so make sakura some what better..