Item: Reincarnation of the Business Man, Naruto - fix grammar
Rating: 5
Author: illegal_incognito

illegal_incognitoAuthor5yr

2018-12-21 15:38

i kinda like this novel... the original was killing me and i just wanna fix it.... clap to Shaikh_Tohaa for his novel.... i am also bored so i'm just gonna do a fix.... visit the original novel and give him some powerstones and also leave a review here. very much appreciated... no powerstones pls

Reincarnation of the Business Man, Naruto - fix grammar

illegal_incognito

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32 Chs

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notlairLv5

Yow dude, you can propose to be the editor of the guy, Btw, did you ask for permission from the guy? Because if not that's kind of a dick move...

5yr

illegal_incognitoAuthor

Well... I put lots of obvious comments that it's not mine and to give powerstones to him.... and I'm not even planning to have it at the same pace.. maybe 5 chapters behind

notlair:Yow dude, you can propose to be the editor of the guy, Btw, did you ask for permission from the guy? Because if not that's kind of a dick move...

5yr

Ove1230Lv12

Why keep writing this **** it wasn’t good when it was on here

5yr

illegal_incognitoAuthor

bored.... and just wanted to do it....... why bother how i waste my life? well tnx for your thoughts and care for me not to waste myself on this

Ove1230:Why keep writing this **** it wasn’t good when it was on here

5yr

Ove1230Lv12

No problem

illegal_incognito:bored.... and just wanted to do it....... why bother how i waste my life? well tnx for your thoughts and care for me not to waste myself on this

5yr

notlairLv5

Well either way you're doing god's work xD But seriously though you deserve some power stone.

illegal_incognito:Well... I put lots of obvious comments that it's not mine and to give powerstones to him.... and I'm not even planning to have it at the same pace.. maybe 5 chapters behind

5yr

DarkImmortal_IntelLv14

ya know what, I'ma edit your edit. Lets make the author shi't his pants!!

5yr

Shaikh_TohaaLv5

No problem go ahead anyway my version had problems somehow and stone won't work. So do your best. Thanks you.

illegal_incognito:Well... I put lots of obvious comments that it's not mine and to give powerstones to him.... and I'm not even planning to have it at the same pace.. maybe 5 chapters behind

5yr

illegal_incognitoAuthor

your work abused me..... so much so with all the ','i have to put in and the 'the' as well as the 'a' that you are missing to make the sentence make sense.... you seriously know how to make a person go brain dead.... that notching thing took me a while before i understood what you were actually trying to say.

Shaikh_Tohaa:No problem go ahead anyway my version had problems somehow and stone won't work. So do your best. Thanks you.

5yr

Shaikh_TohaaLv5

Sure can you give your FB id name

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Shaikh_TohaaLv5

I sent one hope you like it

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ClwxuiLv6

harem ?

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Eat_prideLv6

Well, keep it up. I dropped that novel halfway because i can't wrap my head with the novel's grammar... So if you really want to fix it all, I appreciate it

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BURNINGLv5

I really like it. I rate this 5 stars. ====================================================== ======================================================

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illegal_incognitoAuthor

Reveal spoiler

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