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Nightmare_Taichou
Nightmare_TaichouLv46yr
2019-02-10 09:49

With only eight chapters I don't think I can give a proper review but I'll write on what I can. Character design was done well, the two characters Yue Ji and ChenChen are pretty fleshed out, no problems there. World background...There is a little vagueness in the terms of the Mortal Realm..Sure, readers can know that it's set in the modern day, supposedly China since the characters' names are such. Story Development..so far it's pretty easy to follow and it makes for an interesting read if one likes these kinds of stories with gods. Writing quality is not bad. Continue writing!

The Tales of Three Realms [BL]

X_I_O
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X_I_O
X_I_OAuthor

I can't really show the readers the Mortal Realm, since the geography in the book and in the reality is different. Thanks for the input

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Nightmare_Taichou
Nightmare_TaichouLv4

Ohhh...I understand...wish you all the best though...!

X_I_O:I can't really show the readers the Mortal Realm, since the geography in the book and in the reality is different. Thanks for the input
6yr
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X_I_O
X_I_OAuthor

Yes, author here, a shameless one at that. Please don't mind me. Just passing by. Yes, I'm an utter fool. Tales of Three Realms should be published by the Fifth of February. Quality of the book? Good if not better, BL story, a lot is a lot, the characters might be relatable. The author herself? The worst kind, confused 24/7, whatever.

6yr

Luna1777
Luna1777Lv10

The story so far was interesting. I could imagine how I was in shoes. I'll try to read again to find out more about YueChen personality. Why I thought about Bai Xiaochun from A Will of Enternal? 😅

6yr
Elotra
ElotraLv4

A good start. The novel seems well-written so far and I enjoy the amount of history behind the novel. I really enjoy Chinese novels and works based on Asian culture. Although, BL is not my cup of tea this book seems to be going down the right track. Keep it up and don't give up! Well Done Author!

6yr
AlexAnbi
AlexAnbiLv2

The story, the parts I've read, is very interesting. The progress between characters have a slightly unbalanced pace. Though, there are parts where I can't seem to understand what exactly is happening because of grammar issues. I'll power through to finish this but so far, I'm not quite into it yet.

6yr
StenDuring
StenDuringLv5

Reveal spoiler

6yr
jikanyotomare
jikanyotomareLv12

there are only 4 chapter, i can't give you a review. #kidding... hehe^^ i just want you to release more chapter! i like your imagination and curious how this story continue. want to know more about yuechen though...

6yr
ArinzeArimah
ArinzeArimahLv4

its a shame that there is only 4 chapters so far this novel has me craving for more which all web novels should writing story and characters i give a 5/5

6yr
SouthToiletWizard
SouthToiletWizardLv11

So far world building has been immersive. Demons, God's,and Ghost are similar with distinct differences. The MC is still being fleshed out and his mentor is still demonstrating knowledge. I look forward to seeing how this developes in the future! Please continue the story and may we all gain happiness from it.

6yr
lets_get_this_rice
lets_get_this_riceLv10

I was already sold after the preview😂 Love how deep and detailed the story is! The amount of depth worked into the plot is already smoothly rolled over your head adter only a few chapters. The grammar is really good! It really strengthens the detailed plot, characters, and world. Splendid. Character's are really refreshing. Hope to see some more development later in the story! Keep it up! :)

6yr
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