Review Detail of K3I in You Are My Colour Palette

The story’s great. The writing also improves along the way, or rather it takes shape? At first, the way it was written was as if looking at a dream, somewhat hazy. But it starts to sort of clear up? Well, other than that, there are some grammatical errors and it almost seems as if it’s being typed on a phone with auto correct on. You might want to read it through and check for errors before posting.