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The whole setup is too over powered which would kind of ruin the fun I understand the guy is a God But without limitations I wouldn't really find this story interesting because the original Novel is doing well over 25 novels and is much more detailed per Chapter and suited more to my liking as readers usually tend to grow with their characters
The World Walker System
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That's up to you bro Story concept is good Great choice of a world to start with But my advice is to delete Chapter and start from scratch Make it look like he is a god in observation mode with limited powers And then slowly unravel his might as god If you are really sticking to the god concept But this is just an advice as an author I believe you can change this situation as long as your plot is interesting. Good luck
Indie131998:That's up to you bro Story concept is good Great choice of a world to start with But my advice is to delete Chapter and start from scratch Make it look like he is a god in observation mode with limited powers And then slowly unravel his might as god If you are really sticking to the god concept But this is just an advice as an author I believe you can change this situation as long as your plot is interesting. Good luck