Review Detail of Holly_Webster_5717 in The Good-for-Nothing Seventh Miss

Amazing! This book could be a published book in western countries as a fantasy genre. Author, don't shorten it to be a youth book, this has the potential to be a series long ***** fantasy fiction book! With the help of a proper editor for better sentence construction, wording ect, and there are a few grammar mistakes. I'm excited to see how it goes and hopefully gets published! One of my favourites of about 50 so books I've read so far on this site. A bloody good book about magic, world domination and life, in the world the editor has created. I think at chapter 800 or so, which is all that's out so far, you could almost end it as a whole book. Or end it at the start of devolving the city in the forsaken region, with a little teaser if how it goes. And devote book two about the forsaken region and her next stages of growth. There could be a few more books I would look forward to reading