...it actually stopped for ages. I was disappointed. it wasn't gutter humour at all..have you even seen shows such as fanily guy? [img=faceslap] glad she remembered that although it's embarrassing, it's a great weakness!

I agree! But it doesn't take away the from the fact it's a boss book. can you direct me to the similar bit better stories out there? Cos so far I haven't found anything even comparable to how good this bookbookother aspects

It's not a woman's greatest dream to have kids. Actually I know women worried about finding a partner because they don't want kids. I don't care to have them but if my future husband did I might have one. Enjoying life, just like men do, is our greatest dream. And also a real dream, like a career, or art, or aeroplane pilot lol not kids

Um. he did rape her. If her body was the price for freedom, then yes it's rape because it's manipulated and coercion. That's like saying you didn't rape Some one if you threatened their job and you are their boss. Its still rape. Legally it's a different kind I'm quite sure, but we have laws specifically addressing coercive rape.

Um no. he's in lust. he doesn't even know her well enough to love her. and damn, if I found out he'd taken a recording it would be over. that's illegal.

If I found out he had recorded it and watches it, that would be it. You are scum in my eyes. A voice in your head must have said this was wrong every time you watched it, and you still kept it. Who knows what else is wrong you could do and keep doing it. If there was no voice telling you it was wrong, you are actually a sick ****. It's illegal in my country as well. Why is it making it seem normal!?!

Not a good book. The lead is a rapist who never regrets it except that he may lose her, not because rape is wrong. The way the book is written really downplays it. It makes it seem like the fl is annoying and flaky, but reality is most people would not even like him at all and probably call the police. Also most women wouldn't just go along with him like that and many would not enjoy it no matter how 'good' he was. Just because it isn't violent rape, it's still rape as she feels she has no choice. He actually filmed when he raped her and watches it to masturbate to. This is a huge violation of privacy and illegal in many countries.

I wouldn't. The minute a man like that locked onto me I'd run. Not a huge fan of beauty or money, personality is what attracts me.

gees this butler is way over the top. little bastard. and the author hasn't made it clear it was VERY WRONG of the butler to drug her. although the ml hasn't taken advantage so far, I hope it stays that way. saying he's Japanese that's why he's like that is such a godamn cop out. a lot if emotional manipulation going on here. I never thought the fl was stupid. and faced with a option to make money like that when coming from a poor family, it would be hard to say no even if you didn't want to and are afraid

and you deserve to experience it if you think of women as something to own and possess

Amazing! This book could be a published book in western countries as a fantasy genre. Author, don't shorten it to be a youth book, this has the potential to be a series long ***** fantasy fiction book! With the help of a proper editor for better sentence construction, wording ect, and there are a few grammar mistakes. I'm excited to see how it goes and hopefully gets published! One of my favourites of about 50 so books I've read so far on this site. A bloody good book about magic, world domination and life, in the world the editor has created. I think at chapter 800 or so, which is all that's out so far, you could almost end it as a whole book. Or end it at the start of devolving the city in the forsaken region, with a little teaser if how it goes. And devote book two about the forsaken region and her next stages of growth. There could be a few more books I would look forward to reading

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Lol. maybe in your country. 100 years ago girls got married at 16 so teenage pregnancies were actually normal. With contraceptives subsidised by the government in my country, and *** education in every school, we have lower rates of **** pregnancy then ever in history

it's actually not necessarily willing. if she was drunk, she can't give consent. if you are drunk and horny and have low self esteem you will just go with giving the guy ***. but if sober unlikely. even then, if you are older and hooking up with a younger person around 18, if they are broken and vulnerable and have *** to feel less lonely and loved, you are a sick bastard

this has got to be one of the most poorly written wedding nights, sigh, but then again the ml is obviously an oblivious idiot so I doubt he'd have much more thought into. He might not have much experience I guess, having loved her since school days

or he could clean...what a shocking thought.

aw no don't be so shady. to do that will make me dislike you immensely

Hey didn't he return the favour :( best way to get a girl ready for *** in the future to not be so nervous as well

love it! blue balls has never harmed a man, those who try to manipulate field by saying so are scum