Review Detail of Pgimz in The Last Embrace

Over this novel is going in a good direction. There are sentence structure issues, some sentences are also incomplete, wrong use of 'her'...From reading, it looks to be written in the present tense. However, there are also some errors with the use of the past tense. I like the plot and the general idea of this novel. With some editing, this would be an even greater novel. Good going author. Not your typical vampire stories...give this one a read.