Item: Starting from becoming the King of Saiyans
Rating: 4.2
Author: Velyne

VelyneLv138mth

2024-08-01 13:58

I have finished reading this novel(chap 622) and quite surprised it’s really a good reads for chinese novel and Mtl translations. Props for the great work translator did in this translation. The story itself is typical dragon ball story which Mc always fighting stronger enemies. but the difference is the Mc most of the time are stronger compare to the enemies. The timeline start before goku was born where saiyan planet is still exist. The Mc will become the king of saiyans and the story will progress into the cannon of dragon ball. The novel itself is combination of other dragon ball series such as dragon ball gt, super, heroes and movies as well. Except for some nonsense where some readers couldn’t accept such as almost killing frieza in his first form in the beginning of story, the rest of the story is good. In my opinion it’s normal to have some loopholes in fanfic. Even it happened to some popular novel or manga as well. So, give this Fanfic a try if you are dragon ball fans! P.S. Pls give me other recommendation for dragon ball fanfic since there are only few dragon ball fanfic that actually good.

Starting from becoming the King of Saiyans

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