the MC killed Frieza in the first way, too ridiculous, the author forgot that the Freezar race has the greatest physical resistance in history, Frieza with half his body survived in space, Frieza blew up planet earth in his movie and was still alive, it's impossible for him to die with pathetic 1 million power

I read all the chaps, what can I tell you…although the plot has no differences like just read and u can understand but…dragonball is essentially that…new enemies with new problems, lol! Just read it, for me, it’s quite balanced, the author keep the PL logical and realistic. The transformation although the name can be better but meh. The fight scene is also good but not the best BUT let’s be honest if it’s too complicated then it’ll be boring too. Just read it, when i finished 200+ chaps yknow what I did, I cursed bcs I need to wait for more chaps!!

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This was one of the first fanfics I’ve ever read so im being completely biased when I give this a 5 star. The story while kinda mid is entertaining nonetheless. Using the raw ver I’ve read forward to about chapter 500 or so and I can pretty confidently say that this is a power fantasy where the mc will never lose and if that’s your thing than this is a pretty good novel. It also has some kingdom building as well but it’s kinda sidelined.

Expresándolo en pocas palabras una historia con poco desarrollo de personaje, se siente muy apresurada y deja a medias las cosas, está en total discordancia con lo que representa un Saiyan un guerrero orgulloso que ama las batallas no alguien pacífico me llamo la atención el título pero no es lo que buscaba no me gustó

I have finished reading this novel(chap 622) and quite surprised it’s really a good reads for chinese novel and Mtl translations. Props for the great work translator did in this translation. The story itself is typical dragon ball story which Mc always fighting stronger enemies. but the difference is the Mc most of the time are stronger compare to the enemies. The timeline start before goku was born where saiyan planet is still exist. The Mc will become the king of saiyans and the story will progress into the cannon of dragon ball. The novel itself is combination of other dragon ball series such as dragon ball gt, super, heroes and movies as well. Except for some nonsense where some readers couldn’t accept such as almost killing frieza in his first form in the beginning of story, the rest of the story is good. In my opinion it’s normal to have some loopholes in fanfic. Even it happened to some popular novel or manga as well. So, give this Fanfic a try if you are dragon ball fans! P.S. Pls give me other recommendation for dragon ball fanfic since there are only few dragon ball fanfic that actually good.

Tell the author to stop making excuses to travel to other different space-times, and to stop calling him Lin Chen when his sayajin name is Links. Also, if the novel is based on him being a Saiyan king, let it focus on kingdom building, not adventure.

Honestly one of best system stories ice read in a while Despite lin Chen kinda being a bit mellow sometimes he generally wasnt that bad of an mc honestly liked him tbh though I do wish the romance was written about more but hey still good in my eyes Sad to see this go😭 thanks for writing it man

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