webnovel
HeadCrusher
HeadCrusherLv45yr
2019-09-28 02:59

NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE

Undying Will

Raiohosore
3.7
176 Chs

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
Replies1
Raiohosore
RaiohosoreAuthor

Thanks dude but I would hope that there was some criticism so I can improve cuz I know my writing isn't all that good as of now

5yr
Other Reviews
DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4

Reveal spoiler

4yr

STPRCOMMENDINGGIRL
STPRCOMMENDINGGIRLLv14

Quite annoying.. Like I read 10+ Chp Still has Not know What MC Power Or what he can do.. What I know Just Profile Profile again... The hell Atleast Just give a hint bro.. Boring.

5yr
Grandpa_Deadpool
Grandpa_DeadpoolLv4

Imma be honest with you it's good but not good it's bad but not too bad it's just confusing asf cause the chapters lack information it lacks INFORMATION AND BACKGROUND I understand about the devil fruit and **** but the bounties just in the hundreds of thousands what is this like one piece but the low budget edition cause if you beat doflamingo one of the seven warlords and just get a 600k bounty why don't you just kill yourself ha. The story is good but you lack information and background creativity

4yr
Daoist198784
Daoist198784Lv4

From the very beginning I chose two ****ty abilities, which is already annoying, they also did not normally explain how these ****ty abilities work From the very beginning I chose two ****ty abilities, which is already annoying, they also did not normally explain how these ****ty abilities work

5yr
EnderPL
EnderPLLv6

What a disappointment... I don’t know One Piece so I was just here for the novel but ehhh... Let’s start. Writing quality is good, there’s not a lot of mistakes. Stability of updates for me sucks but meh... Story starts great and I don’t mean the meeting with god as that was stupid af. I mean the time at the island with his parents and the escape. But after...wtf? Ok kid is being train but why is he calling his teacher Senpai? It should be sensei if you want to use Japanese words at least learn the meaning. Then he meets a fat guy that he trusts the moment he sees and the author tried to make the meeting funny just to destroy the settings in the novel that he made before by killing MCs mother and promising revenge. Then the story is just shiit mc changed to a idiot child ( he’s more than 30 btw) know one piece like the back of his hand but his family dies and author doesn’t even write about it. Then bla bla-bla-bla and a lot os stupid shiit. Mc OP? Fuk NO! He had one fight till chapter 70 and ... he lost. Not counting mobs. The story is jumping all over place and he just don’t care after as you don’t know what you read. Overall a total disappointment and waist of time.

4yr
Raiohosore
RaiohosoreAuthor

The author here doing the shameless author thing! Hope y'all like my book, I would love constructive criticism so I can improve my writing and I hope y'all will be patient with me!!! Till the next time Sayonars desu!!

6yr
Ryan_Nguyen_4639
Ryan_Nguyen_4639Lv4

Good job.

5yr
_Medeiros
_MedeirosLv2

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Captain_Bonta_kun
Captain_Bonta_kunLv14

-------------I thinks it's going to be fun. The name of the MC alone is funny naming him after a time machine 😂👍_--------------------------------------------------------------

5yr
Ryan_Nguyen_4639
Ryan_Nguyen_4639Lv4

Ok.

5yr
Related Stories

Stormwind Mage God

This is a tale of a young guy who travels to the world of Azeroth. He's all about love and justice (and not turning into a ghoul), not afraid to give up everything (he can run back to his corpse to respawn), and on a mission to find what's been lost: morals/morality and humanity (integrity). He never stops trying to regain his integrity, even when he falls off the wagon. ------------- Hello everyone I am back with a new Project!!!!! Yes this was previously partially translated on here -https://www.webnovel.com/book/stormwind-mage-god_25830019606309105 I started over from scratch and did not use any of the previous translator's work. To reiterate- this is a CN translation and not an original story. If you're not into Chinese fanfics this is probably not for you. I am not a professional, this is just a hobby for me, and I am just a 1 man team. I do the best that I can with what I have. The more motivated I am the more active I will be in editing up to chapter 80ish to the current standard. If you like what I do feel free to buy me a coffee at https://www.buymeacoffee.com/GPTandChill - or sign up for my patreon @ patreon.com/GPT_And_Chill

Read_and_Chill · Others
4.6
702 Chs

The Marvelous Superman

An unfortunate teenager is reborn as his favorite superhero, Superman, in the Marvel Universe. He will experience the meaning of friendships, love, heroism and much more. -~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~- Oh People of Webnovel! Have you not yet, read my fanfic? Why is it that you're procrastinating with what you know is inevitable? Is it that you're afraid? Afraid of becoming addicted to my fanfic? Well, do not fear anymore, because I'm here to confirm that you will. So it's pointless to fight it! (False advertisement warning) NIKE Just officially came out with a statement for my fanfic, they said "Just read it!" True story bro (But don't be afraid, my fanfic is way better than my synopsis) -~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~- No Harem AU, It's heavily inspired by mcu and the comics, but doesn't follow any of their plots. Avarage words/chapter: 1.0k-1.3k words. This is fanfiction, I don't own any of the characters. Except those I created myself.

Passerby_Venne · Others
4.5
70 Chs

In Hentai World as Mira Tsubakihara's Relative

After Hikari transmigrated, he quickly realized that this 2D world was just a little different from what he'd imagined. There were no Shuchiin Academy, no Service Club, no Yukino or Eriri... Instead, he found himself in a dangerous and downright baffling world. Currently, Hikari was staying at Miss Mira’s place. And as if things couldn’t get weirder, Mira’s best friend was Mrs. Kasumi. In the apartment next door lived a silver-haired beauty who looked exactly like a Yuki-onna, and there were sunflowers and hydrangeas... whatever that meant. His class rep was called Chizuru, his homeroom teacher was named Miwa Shirakawa, and there were three gyarus in his class who, for some reason, wanted to throw a party at his house every day. Then there was Sakurajima Miyajima, the head of the Kendo Club, Nanao Akane, the Baseball Club’s manager, and two sisters from the Archery Club who went by the last name Sakuramiya. Oh, and the neighboring school? That was the prestigious Sekai Girls’ Academy. To top it off, he had some relatives in the countryside named Kaiseiri and Sayoko, and his neighbor was a NEET who called himself a "self-defense force." This world was seriously messed up. Danger lurked everywhere, and if you weren't careful, you'd get dragged into something weird, or worse. "This world might be full of filth and corruption, but I'll smash it with a single punch." --The Pure Love Battle God, Nakamura Hikari. ═❀═❀═Its A Translation═❀═❀═ Raw: 在成人世界里作为椿原美拉的亲属 Author: 小鲨鱼

AmbitiousTransltor · Others
4.4
207 Chs

Tower of God: Sequence Strength

What do you desire? Money and riches? Honor and Pride? Revenge? Or something that transcends all these? Whatever you desire... Is Here! The Tower of God welcomes you! ~~~ ~~~ In a sense, the Tower was a saving grace; a disgusting prank played on Winston Heath when he was suddenly transported to these strange lands. Now, climbing a tower where any wish could be granted so long until the top was reached, Winston yearns to find a purpose for himself. However, Irregulars have always brought changes to the tower! How will he fare? Especially when armed with the three pathways of the Lord of Mysteries?! ~~~ ~~~ Volume 1: Vistas of the Test Floor What terrifying sights lie beyond, and what whispers within the waves? In the endlessness of the tower, who could pass through the trials? Amidst the flowing waves of the divine water, who could achieve the unthinkable? On the floor of tests, dangers lurk both in the dark and in clear sight. ~~~ Volume 2: Hunter in the Waves Who lurks in the shadows and what peers from the mist? The dangers of the tower are many to name. When a Hunter sets the bait for the fish, the blood will attract sharks all the same. When bait is thrown into the sea of fate, the ripples are bound to bounce back. Amid the expansive tower, who can unravel the Mysteries? In the epicenter of conflict, who will come out on top?

Yesnth · Others
4.8
119 Chs
Login