Review Detail of KoFu_ in ROZ

I love stories that go back to the past to stop the imminent doom, and more if that involves zombies. But I read 4 chapters and it really hurts my eyes the way you write. Sometimes when he thinks something you use "xxx" but some other times you use the proper 'xxx'...And you mix those up in a middle of the sentence so is really confusing, instead of using expressions like ... He frustrated responded to her mother... Yes, mother, we have a deal...You use this weird type of writing..."Yes, 'we have', mother," Also, a lot of sentences you don't use capitals letters to start the conversation...Just wtf. Fix your grammar, be consistent with the way you write and maybe the story is worth reading. Because right now, I can't read it properly, it takes an extra mile to me to read such a story, and I really don't want to do that. I just can't read anymore, I reached chapter 12 and my eyes couldn't take it anymore. Sorry, please reply to this comment when you are done editing all your chapters because the story seems interesting but right now is illegible.