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Morning_FragranceLv145yr
2019-08-16 03:16

Writing quality is good in terms of grammar most of the time but the vocabulary is stale and boring. It's mentally taxing reading one chapter since how dull it is. Chapter release is steady, not surprising for a stale story. Sorry, gotta be toxic. Story development is milked, no doubt about that. The author makes too many questions for things and no answers for many. Character design is honestly garbage since the experience of Izroth doesn't match up. The strongest of his original world but he can't dodge and can't sense anything watching him, you're in a cultivation world that is dog eats dog. Where is your intuition? Due to this the MC's fat fucking layers of plot armor stands out. World background? What the ****? I gave it two stars? HAHAHA, I'm dropping that down to one. There is honestly no foundation for world development. I started reading this when it first came out, I let it sit and maybe I might come back to it later. Maybe I might enjoy it then? Came back recently and realized, "This is just a stale story that is targeted for freshies who don't have a brain to know quality."

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galalijanLv13

I read reviews like yours and I think “why the **** he give it three stars” form what you said I’d say it would get 2 max

Unruh_Lv11

-> Update Stability -> Writing Quality

galalijan:I read reviews like yours and I think “why the **** he give it three stars” form what you said I’d say it would get 2 max
Unruh_Lv11

I'll have to agree with everything you stated. Also, the time ratio just seems f*cked up going from how slow the story is going and how many info-dumps have been done already. Which I also find interesting is that the author chooses to elaborate every single battle no matter how insignificant in great detail. He wastes 3 Chapters with one battle against 2 giant monsters. Also, it is bothering that the battles seem oddly familiar to each other. Same vocabulary, same structure, same skills the MC used, same party combos. Stale, dull, boring.

savchewLv1

it’s been ages since ur comment but could you give me some examples of what you mean by stale vocab? I haven’t read the story i’m just looking through the reviews

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