Read all of it so far and i have got to say, clap clap, in my opinion the bleach moves are just way too good that it almost makes any story good instantly. Bankai? in a cultivation world, i've never been so thrilled so it happen. The novel uses anime characters as a replacement for some of the characters which makes it really is to imagine if you have seen the anime character before. the writing quality is pretty good compared to others, there is some broken sentences but anyone with half a brain should be able to understand the message trying to be told. Updates are every now and then, though i just started reading this recently so i am only going based off the dates the chapters was released. The story development is very good in my opinion, a lot of potential. i mean this is ATG + System/Bleach + multiple universes??? there is too much potential in my opinion. the original ATG i liked the first 230 chapters a lot however it slowly became very painful to keep reading it, really hope too see these arcs done in more of a correct and bad ass way compared to the original. Thanks for the chapters! As a fellow writer, take your time, excited to see how things go.
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Wow..thanks...i tend to read my sentence sometimes and fix it. You know writers tend to make mistakes...but as lkng as the grammar is correct...haha..thanks for your support ..
Yeh writers definitely make mistakes, but some readers are also the problem in some cases complaining about broken sentences and refusing to read any further. Some just plain abuse the author and give 1 star just to lower the competition haha sad really. Anyway, good luck with everything
Nora_Danish:Wow..thanks...i tend to read my sentence sometimes and fix it. You know writers tend to make mistakes...but as lkng as the grammar is correct...haha..thanks for your support ..
