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jayharemu_oLv35yr
2019-10-25 10:45

As a fan of novels that let you turn your brain or live out your power fantasy I still found this novel to be lackluster the writer is not using his genre to his full potential and abuses the simplest shortcuts it provides. The most boring aspect of this novel is the overly blank slate protagonist. Overall it’s a very good concept it just needs iron out in many places this novel reminds me of a story I tried to write but didn’t have enough time for. Wish this novel was done better but good job to author for getting his work out there

The Divine Wolf... or?

Tyrone_Bedoire
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Tyrone_Bedoire
Tyrone_BedoireAuthor

So, I've been seeing authors doing this, so I might as well do it myself, I mean why not? Anyways, I'm very insecure so if you're too harsh with your critique I'm going to go cry in a corner. Nah but for real though, I hope everyone enjoys the story, and if you don't then I hope you manage to find something better out there!

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Imrael
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Tsubasa93
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Aris_Nugraha
Aris_NugrahaLv3

I like this novel mc rincarnated to wolf anti-mainstream. need more chap hehe

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LordOfTheAbsolute
LordOfTheAbsoluteLv4

AQUI E BRAZUCA CORRE NEGADA, falando sério está obra tem potencial , por enquanto está bom mas não pare metade das fan-fics não prosperam porque os autores não continuam a obra , e as pessoas acabam perdendo interesse.

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Boaz_Michaeli
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Jlax
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Kadifichi
KadifichiLv11

Dumb mc he acts like a dog. Dropped after he followed the princess. MC IS DUMB if that's your cup of tea then this is the book for you..... ... ... ... .. ..

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MaxiMaxe
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Daoist_3_pies
Daoist_3_piesLv10

By chapter 12 the mc and everyone hes meet so far is completly unlikeable, disintersting, and everyone except mary sue princess is a couple brainvells from retarded. Mc starts out wanting to be strong and wanting to gain power quickly. 3 chapter later hes being bullied, put down, and had mary sue use mind manipulation magic on him and HE FEELS BAD FOR GETTING ANGRY AFTER HE GOT DISRESPECTED TO HIS FACE AND SHE USES MAGIC TO AFFECT HIS MIND. I just wish i could give the story .05/5. Completly gutted his own story and didnt make it chapter 20. The most likeable character? The dead enemies the mc killed that are just animals trying to survive.

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