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Below_Average
Below_AverageAuthor5yr
2018-11-27 06:26

Tell me what you think of my idea down here. How do you like it. What could I improve upon. What would you like to see. Go on don't be shy.

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ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6

It's a good idea but it also exists, to the letter, "The Merchant of Death" if you make it different, better or just as good, go a head.

Below_Average
Below_AverageAuthor

Damit although I will read that and see if there is a way to improve what he did in any way, thank you.

ErozothDraeor:It's a good idea but it also exists, to the letter, "The Merchant of Death" if you make it different, better or just as good, go a head.
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

I hope you do not mimic him it’s way to dark in my opinion we are all crazy but the peaple who are called a sociopath are the ones that show it openly so honestly it shuld be a mc that will kill all the vilans and castrate stark. And destroy both hidra shield and make his own kingdom in its place take the world and As well as make a harem of hot girls who love him. Also make the mc feel love and feelings just make them dule for everyone else but his loved ones. Basicly if you hurt my wifus you will die your loved ones will die to. Not on a level of a freaking world like the outher novel

Below_Average:Damit although I will read that and see if there is a way to improve what he did in any way, thank you.
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

Also pls not as much human expementation like the outher Guy a little is ok but to much makes it less enjoyable

Below_Average:Damit although I will read that and see if there is a way to improve what he did in any way, thank you.
Below_Average
Below_AverageAuthor

He is not a scientist so I don’t think he would get anything out of that.

CliffkunLolRekt:Also pls not as much human expementation like the outher Guy a little is ok but to much makes it less enjoyable
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

But will you let there be a harem while bieng a crazy dood with a harem can be bad for outhers health a lonely crazy man can be even more dangeris and sad for the world and mc let the mc be crazy but not to much kill whoever he dislikes and let live the ones he is ok with give him a harem so he will have at least a little compassion

Below_Average:He is not a scientist so I don’t think he would get anything out of that.
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

You know where I’m coming from

Below_Average:He is not a scientist so I don’t think he would get anything out of that.
Below_Average
Below_AverageAuthor

I’m not into harems

CliffkunLolRekt:But will you let there be a harem while bieng a crazy dood with a harem can be bad for outhers health a lonely crazy man can be even more dangeris and sad for the world and mc let the mc be crazy but not to much kill whoever he dislikes and let live the ones he is ok with give him a harem so he will have at least a little compassion
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

Also I’d love if you gave him a mix of Helsing abrigid and dead pool as a personality for the mc that will be both funny and cool add in a harem and it’s the best dang thing one could find lol

Below_Average:He is not a scientist so I don’t think he would get anything out of that.
Below_Average
Below_AverageAuthor

Dead pool maybe insane but he is no psychopath or sociopath

CliffkunLolRekt:Also I’d love if you gave him a mix of Helsing abrigid and dead pool as a personality for the mc that will be both funny and cool add in a harem and it’s the best dang thing one could find lol
Below_Average
Below_AverageAuthor

And I’ve read comics and watched movies forever who is helping? Unless we are talking about that one vampire in that one anime?

CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

He kills anyone he wants and if he felt that the world is something he truly hates he will masicure all the men in the world and bang all the girls cus he is a perv we all know he has no problem killing it’s just he has no insentive big enough to do it

Below_Average:Dead pool maybe insane but he is no psychopath or sociopath
Below_Average
Below_AverageAuthor

I wasn’t planing on him being a perv but I just might think about it now, no promises though.

CliffkunLolRekt:He kills anyone he wants and if he felt that the world is something he truly hates he will masicure all the men in the world and bang all the girls cus he is a perv we all know he has no problem killing it’s just he has no insentive big enough to do it
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