Review Detail of WinterBud in Clockwork Revenant

I've only read the available five chapters thus far, but that's enough to form a firm opinion. The author is a highly experienced hand at writing, anyone could tell that much. Aside from the few minor errors that could easily be fixed by proofreading, the sentences are nearly damn perfect. A reader should have no trouble taking in what's being conveyed in the way that the author intended them to be understood. Not sure about the stability of updates. If it's not erratic, it should deserve a five, right? I only gave story development a four because the story's still in the very early stages. World background, ditto. This is still subject to change once we get more chapters, but I really don't have any complaints about what we have so far. Character design, a solid five after I read that chapter of interactions between side characters. Had me cracking nonstop. I'd have to say some of these characters seem *ehem* very familiar for readers of high fantasy. That makes them a bit cliche somewhat, but fockit, I don't care. Keep 'em coming, dude/tte :)