Review Detail of JA_Anton in Clockwork Revenant

The vivid descriptions in the narrative really captivated me. The very first chapter and the way the author described Iro--his physical features and his current predicament to be exact--can really draw in readers to keep on reading. Writing-wise, I only saw very minimal errors including a few typos, word confusion (lying-laying), and also some errors in preposition (especially between in and on). The author should also look into his dialogue formatting. The sudden shift in POV somehow seems a bit off for me. But perhaps it's just my personal taste. Apart from these minor details, I find the story well-written. There is not much to say yet with the characters and the world background as only five chapters are posted. But I already find Iro's character really intriguing. Would love to read more about the soldiers as well. Overall, I did enjoy the read and would come back for more.