While there are some logical inconsistencies with what the MC acts and thinks like versus his experience, I didn't notice them until other's pointed them out, and that made me convinced of the character's realness. If I can't differentiate between things, it only makes it more believable that the character can't either. While I do get tired of all the enemies, and the lack of time to train, it's more annoyance than frustration, and I can only imagine what someone in that position must feel as well. Anyway, it's well written, unique, and it has potential to be the next Epic. Thank you Author for writing it, and thank you for letting me read it.
TomVanDyke
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