Heavenly_Earthworm
.
of reading
299
Read books
Badges
5Moments
16
Heavenly_Earthworm3mthCommentedCh 1 Prologue- Heavenly_Earthworm3yrCommented
I feel like this might have been better translated as "reputation". Like "leaving a name for himself" as in, how others view him. They don't leave 'names' behind, the guy wanted to leave a good reputation. It makes more sense in the following paragraph when replacing name with reputation.
This is the "name". - Heavenly_Earthworm3yrReplied to MPath
Earlier on it said that the males lived there even after growing of age, so I assume the girls get married out and the guys stay and share the estate
This paragraph has been deleted. - Heavenly_Earthworm3yrCommented
A little earlier two people in the comments said it could just be a high level sorcerer trying to get a small demon, but now I'm more assured since he waited for the magic power to 'run out' and since it wasn't too long of a time it shouldn't be too dangerous.
Roy grabbed the low-grade soul and stored it. He stepped into the magic formation and noticed that the glow from the magic formation was about to disappear, meaning that the summoner's magic power was not much, so Roy finally felt relieved about responding to the summon. - Heavenly_Earthworm3yrReplied to thewayofKABOOMMMMM
We don't know how long it took to hatch though. Could be a 60 minute process from laying to hatching for all we know. Plus all the different species and constant new arrivals from the waves onto the beach, nobody can time it exactly
Is this the consequence of premature birth? - Heavenly_Earthworm3yrCommented
gimme gimme, chicken tendy
Smiling lightly, Cai Zixuan and the others watched on. Today, none of them had the right to fight for the coveted piece of meat. Sniggling, Wang Ruoxiang said, "Eat more. The steamed chicken here is exceptionally tender and juicy." - Heavenly_Earthworm3yrCommented
F
He looked at the fifteen naked rats and thanked them silently. "Thank you, mice friends. Thank you for your contribution to medicine. Be reborn as a human being." - Heavenly_Earthworm3yrReplied to profdiem
At this point, I'm sure there must be a word that doesn't translate well that describes 'the most popular/pretty girl' in an area. Fairy and Goddess must be the closest matches.
Wang Ruoxiang was their class monitor, who had outstanding academic ability, a beautiful appearance, and a great personality. For a school goddess like her, the number of people lining up to court her could stretch from the teaching building to the bureau centre. Tycoon Jun was naturally one of them as well. He had pursued her passionately, but his courtship eventually ended with Wang Ruoxiang's harsh words: "Sorry. We are two different kinds of human beings, and I will never fall in love with your kind of human being." - Heavenly_Earthworm3yrPosted
While there are some logical inconsistencies with what the MC acts and thinks like versus his experience, I didn't notice them until other's pointed them out, and that made me convinced of the character's realness. If I can't differentiate between things, it only makes it more believable that the character can't either. While I do get tired of all the enemies, and the lack of time to train, it's more annoyance than frustration, and I can only imagine what someone in that position must feel as well. Anyway, it's well written, unique, and it has potential to be the next Epic. Thank you Author for writing it, and thank you for letting me read it.
- Heavenly_Earthworm3yrCommented
Everyone ignoring 'coined'? In no circumstance is coined a way of speaking. You can coin a phrase, but it's making popular a whole new term, not delivering dialogue.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Heavenly_Earthworm3yrCommented
Chuckles. *I'm in danger.*
Welcome to Pandemonium - Heavenly_Earthworm3yrReplied to urekmazimo
Just a common expletive. A little more emphatic than just "f me" because not only are you getting f'd, you know you're getting f'd real good because it's even sideways.
"Fuck me sideway! "Jake cursed as he started swimming again under a new rush of adrenaline. - Heavenly_Earthworm3yrCommented
Theft flag
Companion Beasts that hatched after incubation would live and die with their masters. It was very difficult for them to be transferred. If a forceful transfer was made, an extremely huge price needed to be paid. The typical person had no way of achieving that. - Heavenly_Earthworm3yrCommented
VRMMO's hurry up and get here sooner
Zhou Wen obviously wasn't as Tian Xiangdong imagined. Gaming similarly allowed him to grow stronger. Furthermore, the in-game character was equivalent to another him. When the in-game character was in combat, he would acquire the experience and skill familiarity from combat; therefore, he had no need to train. - Heavenly_Earthworm3yrReplied to NikTitanik866
I read that as "word thong" and I had to picture a word with a wedgie
At the city gates, a throng of travelers were impatiently waiting for the inspections to be completed so they could enter the city before nightfall. It had been a busy day, with many new faces finding their way to the City of Andor's Edge.