Item: Rise of the Scorpion
Rating: 4.8
Author: Curiosity44

Curiosity44Lv145yr

2019-02-15 15:53

this is honestly one of the strangest novels i have ever read. the concept is actually really cool and i love the MC but the strange thing is that the writing quality is aweful but it never threw me off. i have read a lot of fan-fics where the english is bad enough to give you eye cancer(joke) however this novel somehow felt smooth......maybe its the fast pace.....not sure.... anyway author-san thanks for this cool novel, please find an editor though and you could easily break the top 30

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