So far this is a good read. Sentences flow nicely and the emotion is there among the characters through their interactions and the events that happen to them. The protagonist is a well rounded character who is also written nicely. I would like to see more of the description of places in depth but this is overall every other aspect including the story and characters is interesting. Keep on writing!
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