I liked it it was vary vary refreshing I would like to to read more the whole hero villain thing is awesome keep it up 😍 It reminds me of the arrow with steet wise smarts unlike the arrow show were it's got it's Rich boy bules type

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Hello, Unfortunately I see signs of Hiatus. I have no doubt that this quite interesting Fan-fic is going to be ( has been ) dropped. Enjoy reading those few chaps and then go cry.

it's a pretty good read with interesting premise. The author does need to work on his grammar and get an editor or proofreader, some paragraphs look as if lines were skipped, it also gets confusing to tell who's talking.

I quite linked these first 5 chapters. I'm sorry to see that it's been a month since the last update. The story has potential, its fluently written and reads naturally. I recommend the author to continue the story.

This is one of the best Marvel fanfic I have ever read most of them are just painful to read the concept is great and unique just a few grammar problems.

tem muito potencial contanto que o autor não abandone tem uma boa chance de estar no topo desse site. Claro se o autor conseguir equilibrar o protagonista o bastante pra ele não ser considerado hipocrita, que geralmente é o erro mais comum em fanfics com karma bom e karma ruim.

For me, as far as the story goes, it was cool at the beginning but became lame later on. The writing quality is alright. Few mistakes here and there. I won't get into the details that make me think it gets lame since I feel like it's just because I came in with expectations. Needless to say, those expectations were met only in the beginning really. Then they weren't, and I got disappointed by where the story is heading. There's an audience for this. Unfortunately for me, it just isn't me.