Review Detail of daisora in Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator
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it was good till some point. but seriously there is a limit to how much non sense is this, his regret over 500 year, his wife, he simply abandoned her on earth and went somewhere, even if he is an immortal but she is not, by the time he return she will be either dead or a papa, I really want to hit the author.
Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator
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That what I'm saying. for a story to continue mc creates contention with characters he meet that how stories are formed getting rid of everyone he meets its like the characters is a blank slate. everything he worked so hard for. the people that respected him, feared him, wife he fought so hard for. all off that. The story should have a goal to work towards he went back 500 years he saved the white hair girl, he saved his childhood friend. gained weath, status, and power. he finally have his childhood crush. to me the goal was to fix the mistakes of his past, but mainly to marry his childhood crush. that where it should end. anyways I agree with you if they really wanted to continue make a sequel about what happened during those 500 years make it emotional, determined to get back to fix his wrongs. it would give it a nice wrap to the beginning. sequel leading up the the main storyline. I'd love it