you put effort into making this novel and it turned into a good novel but sadly there is several points that is making it unfruitful.for example you made an adventure into the dwarf kingdom made the mc into the its king with the 2 Elf princess as his wives and a rich mine but later you disposed of it all by two words "kingdom fall" without anything out of this Volume but Victor and a potential enemy that rarely appeared.this is just one of the many event that you made only to dispose of later, I have the felling that you are merely throwing out all kind of events without prober planning or that you forget about it.

AUTHOR! are you going to continue writing or is this just a temporarily releases? I already forgot most of the characters and events, I don't want to reread it only for you to stop again.

a whole chapter for a monologue!!?please don't do it again author.

someone with a holy magic, please cast purification on me🙏

I am not mad about the edit itself but that he tried to lie about it being the case all long but it is you guys who didn't realize.just to make it clear, I like the story that I read it several times, that is way it is annoying.

I fell like cursing for real but I will refrain,Mr author, are you making fun of our IQ or your, I wouldn't have really minded if you said that you edited it or left it with no comment but, really, don't you know that chapter 3 will get a notice beside it that it got edited 2 days ago? coincidentally the same day this chapter was published.moreover the old version of the chapter is everywhere on the net and easy to confirm.the worst part is that you didn't completely edit that chapter since there was more than once that "the protagonist" got mentioned even "the hero's" at the end of the chapter.that is really a let down.

rather than enjoying the story I got a headache.sigh, couldn't you make it less complicated.

cruel author!😭 I just hope the MC won't become a jerk or a chicken after this.

for real ? a new chapter for real !!!

so, maybe the reason Jessica died because she was lazy and used the tunnel as shortcut? which in a sense is because of Rudy that she became lazy?

Are you writing again or dropped this novel?

It is a pity that only IMMORTALS are cab able of seeing the end of this novel

Alena so annoying, what will she do knowing Elsa's origin, will she die if she didn't!! she is just a busybody.

Alena is annoying, really annoying.

hmm, coincidentally, we are in the middle of September⏰

you can't expect him to love all the girls he has to get before even meeting them right? he is trying to love them gradually, that also can be seen when he struggled to act/manipulate Shira since he was sure he won't like her.

green eyes, yellow hair. his big sister or mother.

author, your story is good but the chapters are very very short ether it is in number of words or progress of the story moreover most of the words are useless and have the same meaning in around beat manner. I hope you can fix your chapters a little before you lose support and drop it, at least increase the words per chapter

how did he increase his status by 138 points (13800 LP) with only 7450 LP? and how did he save those 50 point anyway isn't the the price for all the status except mana 100LP, did he increase a half point or something?

?? I don't think so, it has been some time but I remember some of the details, she is not only not his mother but she seem like his lover in someway I don't know how, and he gave her a book about how to proceed (love) to help him recover his memory, so she is only acting as his mother, she is not even his adopted mother and she never looked at him as her son but he don't know or more like don't remember.