Review Detail of TheMostAbstract in The System of a Vampire

The beginning of the story was confusing for me but it cleared up around the end of the first volume, I assume the author was in the process of rewriting the early chaps. The main character is a very fleshed out persona and is surprisingly not too overpowered considering it's a system novel. The characters such as the mage and Kira have so much depth its suprising from an ******* author. The pacing is good and his portrayal of a psychopath is top notch. My only qualmn is the lack of description of the world itself, his background history is very good but when he just says a swamp town it leaves me unable to picture the scene in my head. Over all I highly recommend this book even though it went premium, after all, a small price to pay for sal- *cough*, quality.