Review Detail of Drunkendaoist in The System of a Vampire
Review detail
So I ask everyone to ignore the bad reviews as those have been resolved and should no longer be relevant thank you to everyone who put up with the original version and followed me to the new one hope you all have a blessed day
The System of a Vampire
Drunkendaoist
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TheMostAbstractLv11TheMostAbstract
Good work so far on the novel, as I said in my review I recommend that you flesh out descriptions of the scenery and characters appearances, the ability to mentally picture the story is one of the best things you can give to a reader, from one author to another, good job and keep it up.
Drunkendaoist:Still up for discussion
DrunkendaoistAuthorDrunkendaoist
Actually I'm about to take some time and fix some things, just to make it better so may not put new chaps out until I do
TheMostAbstract:Good work so far on the novel, as I said in my review I recommend that you flesh out descriptions of the scenery and characters appearances, the ability to mentally picture the story is one of the best things you can give to a reader, from one author to another, good job and keep it up.
syanongparakLv4syanongparak
Drunkendaoist:Gotta read, too much to explain but personally think it gets way better after
syanongparakLv4syanongparak
Drunkendaoist:Gotta read, too much to explain but personally think it gets way better after
