Overall, really good. I can see that you are having fun into writing this because of the own little world you have. Creating something allows you to be free with your writing. I hope you continue to have fun in writing as well as continuing. Good luck in your future endeavors
MedusaDiva
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LIKESinB:Ah **, there are some grammatical errors that I think you should fix. For example, your chapter 1 title. You put a space between the quotation marks and the first letter of the word.
MedusaDiva:I know what censored means but what do you mean by that?
UnjustlyUnderpaid:The letter (p) and (s) together with a period between them are censored for some strange reason
UnjustlyUnderpaid:The letter (p) and (s) together with a period between them are censored for some strange reason