Item: Taking Over Yue Zhong's Body In GDW
Rating: 1.8
Author: Hocolate

HocolateLv46yr

2018-12-26 00:33

Aku gk tahan namanya Asep, sumpah kalo bisa dikasih nama cikrak ato apalah. Kupikir ini novel romance, ternyata hentai gore parah.++!++++++++++++++++++++++++++aku gk tau kenapa penulis dari indo mengarah story kayak gini+++++ aku kasih sesuai kenyataan yah

Taking Over Yue Zhong's Body In GDW

Morvian

4.1

29 Chs

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MorvianAuthor

Wow rasa bencinya nyata!! 👍👍👍 Ampe 2 review yang negatifnya!! Mantap bang... baru gw nemuin orang kaya lu bro yang benci gw! Semua orang-orang indo yg baca novel gua paling nyela dikomen trus out langsung sesudah bilang maaf novel gw bukan selera mereka!! Mereka gak pake ninggalin review biar rating turun!! 👌👌👌 TOP lah SALUTE!! 👍👍👍

6yr

HocolateLv4

Makan semangka aja bro biar kamu gak benci lagi ke aku

Morvian:Wow rasa bencinya nyata!! 👍👍👍 Ampe 2 review yang negatifnya!! Mantap bang... baru gw nemuin orang kaya lu bro yang benci gw! Semua orang-orang indo yg baca novel gua paling nyela dikomen trus out langsung sesudah bilang maaf novel gw bukan selera mereka!! Mereka gak pake ninggalin review biar rating turun!! 👌👌👌 TOP lah SALUTE!! 👍👍👍

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