(Like 60+ chapters in and will read more tomorrow but this deserves review because it's good story if you're hesitating to read it trust me and read...) The beginning did a great job to introduce the story and main character, telling us about her personal life when it was "carefree". I like that we aren't thrown in out of nowhere but you slowly ease us into the story and that is what good pacing is. The way the character speaks are wise and do resemble a lot of the actual chinese novels I read too so it's really believable when they interact with each other. When you describe the places, I like how there are new words I don't know and it actually makes the story feel much richer as well. I like how it feels like a simple slice of life about Jen's school life at Yellow River school and how she grows as a character and meets friends. The chinese history and customs are always so interesting and the way you explain your world keeps me on my toes too!! It's so cool watching Jen in all the classes/stages. The action does not disappoint! Suggestions could be double checking grammar. Could still get through story and didnt bother me but there was some long running sentences that could be cut down. Cultivation names are hard for me too haha... Added to my library and shall continue reading tonight/will leave some more thoughts when i get to final chapter
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