Item: Heart Cultivation
Rating: 4
Author: JoanB

JoanBLv66yr

2019-01-22 01:42

The story is interesting in its own way but a bit winding, of which is not a big problem. The writer only wishes to show how the MC developed along the way. She has a strong sense of justice and portraying a strong-willed woman. However, the beauty of the story is not portrayed well due to grammar problem. I would suggest to the author to get an editor. I'll be changing my rating in the future base on the progress of the story. Salute to the author.

Heart Cultivation

_Sha

4.6

378 Chs

Liked by 5 people

Replies2

_ShaAuthor

Thanks JoanB for your time to concern this novel.

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JoanBLv6

Keep up and finish the book.

_Sha:Thanks JoanB for your time to concern this novel.

6yr

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