Item: The Hitting Zone
Rating: 4.8
Author: EliteCreature

EliteCreatureLv46yr

2019-01-06 16:38

!Warning! This novel contains quiet protagonist who ISN'T shameless, is working to overcome true life adversity, and DOESN'T fall out of character whenever plot devices are needed. All characters obey their character designs, and act within the bounds of personality limits. The plot flows well, and doesn't get ahead of itself. The author is keeping up a constant stream of smaller chapters. This is easy on upkeep, and is a smart decision in case life gets busy or writer's block happens. The only reason that this doesn't get a perfect score for me is that there are moments (very few, but they are there) where intense or emotional points don't hit home as strongly as they could. This is nitpicky, but 'hey' I'm allowed to critique. This is a review. TL;DR: one of the best novels on this site, and it does it without containing all the gimmicks of the majority of novels here, like guilty pleasure harems/ruthless protagonist/protagonist achieving everything and being perfect/blah blah blah. TL;DR;DR - Read this novel.

The Hitting Zone

half_empty

4.7

1210 Chs

Liked by 121 people

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half_emptyAuthor

Thanks for such a detailed review! I hope to improve on those points now that you’ve pointed it out! 😄

6yr

SoulReaper_LordLv2

That is so true

6yr

UltrazoneLv10

Lol

5yr

OtherRealmInvader_Lv4

What an elite review

5yr

Test_hlSkovngshzLv1

زج

Ultrazone:Lol

5yr

Jack_BaluLv3

I found a book its named Story of legends i recommend it book was amazing you should check it out

5yr

bichuniLv1

does this have romance or harem? i looked through the reviews and i think it looks good, hopefully there's none 🙏

half_empty:Thanks for such a detailed review! I hope to improve on those points now that you’ve pointed it out! 😄

4yr

KING_IN_YELLOWLv5

hey any romance?

half_empty:Thanks for such a detailed review! I hope to improve on those points now that you’ve pointed it out! 😄

3yr

WindMasterLv6

is this novel dropped or a planned hiatus?

3yr

MusponLv13

the author has health problems not sure exactly what but she dissapears for days and weeks at a time before coming back

WindMaster:is this novel dropped or a planned hiatus?

3yr

Kaizou_KoiLv12

Author is there any romance in this novel?

half_empty:Thanks for such a detailed review! I hope to improve on those points now that you’ve pointed it out! 😄

1yr

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