Item: The Hitting Zone
Rating: 5
Author: Immortal_Kumquat

Immortal_KumquatLv116yr

2019-01-05 11:52

This novel is absolutely godlike I find myself extremely exited every time I see that this novel has been updated. It is one of the best novels I have read in my career thus far. Thank you author for writing this amazing novel.

The Hitting Zone

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4.7

1210 Chs

Liked by 85 people

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half_emptyAuthor

Such a high compliment! Thank you! 😄 I hope I don’t let you down!

6yr

Aanish_NarulaLv4

Sup

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Aanish_NarulaLv4

Sup dude

half_empty:Such a high compliment! Thank you! 😄 I hope I don’t let you down!

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HornshelLv5

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Ortez_Littlejohn_1439Lv2

🤥

5yr

rahulsharmaLv3

Its good story I actually appreciate your writing hoping for more excitement hope you keep the same pace like you are doing now hope for good chapters

5yr

DannyhdyidLv2

Great

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Aron_ZacariasLv2

Noice 👌

5yr

Juliet_ahweLv1

how are you are you doing I'm ready for hookup I'm from USA

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Juliet_ahweLv1

hello

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Gaurav_Negi_2800Lv3

The only prob I have with this novel is the time it takes to update chapters. Other than that it's a gem of a novel

8mth

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