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Chenglei
ChengleiLv116yr
2019-02-20 02:37

This Fan-fic does seem to have potential. The protagonist is not smart from the start, but it makes sense considering the fact that he was just a normal civilian that suddenly got Magical Powers. The only issue that this Novel has is the HORRIBLE grammar! I think some mentioned how this is actually translated? (I am not sure.) But the translator could've at least bothered to clean up the chapters....

Marvel Invincible Talisman

yassinose
4.0
121 Chs

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KappaDaoist
KappaDaoistLv5

nah he even retard compare to kid

6yr
WeavingSpider
WeavingSpiderLv6

Even a seven year old who tries to hide his face doesnt show it to the first other person or tell said person every secret of him. This my sir/madam/apache is next level retard

5yr
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Democratis
DemocratisLv11

Reveal spoiler

6yr

GGMissFortune
GGMissFortuneLv6

trash "translation".... you give MC full Thor (odinforce) and Superman powers + several centuries of absorbing sunlight in alternate world but plot is still exactly the same... ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ

6yr
_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4

My second review here. I would like to correct that while this fanfic is indeed just the translation of a chinese fanfic in the beginning, but it gets very different as the story progresses. The original one is very boring as the M.C doesn't have chaos stone. That means he stays stupid and he only have the 12 spells all the way till the end. The author here changed many things and made this fanfic really great.

6yr
AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

I cant read this no more. The mc is so retarded and brainless. He keeps doing stupid decisions over and over again i just cant take it anymore. And the MC is supposed to be that way. So if you like retarded dumb MC's that keep making stupid decisions that make no sense. Other then maybe to piss off the readers. Then you will like this fanfic. But if you like even some what smart MC's that think before they act then this is not for you. I think this MC has some learning disabilities.

6yr
_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4

The grammar is very bad, but this is a very good novel. I don't understand why someone wouldn't translate it. If there is anyone who can speak chinese and have some extra time to kill, I think many people would want to read it. On the other hand, I thank the translator for making the effort. I really appreciate it. Keep it up.

6yr
Dragonrage7
Dragonrage7Lv13

I love how the mc is smart now๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

6yr
Aagnus
AagnusLv14

I saw in the end of the synopsis you have an editor...... What kind of editor is it? Is he really doing he's job editing the grammars to improve it? I like the story of this novel but it really annoys me how bad the grammars is. Hope it improves... Really

6yr
ViolenceOfNumbers
ViolenceOfNumbersLv6

This started out rough for me to read & get into but... I'm glad I stayed with it. It's surprising that its intriguing to me! Acknowledgement of Novel Troupes Systems in the beginning was clever in a way. A very distinct way of showing how unique your novel concept truly is! Bringing two things that usually would never touch. Everyone is So use to Pb& j troupe concepts of novels that a peanut butter and banana sandwhich cought readers by surpise blew minds alittle, aleast from what I see of other reviews of this novel. Might not be for everyone but I like grew to like it! I remember jack adventures on Saturday mornings. I liked it then and never realized how OP those abilities could be in another world background, & in one person! Bravo for taking a chance. Not ignoring every plot hole questions as your story is progressing refreshing. Questions like, duality of heroics : kill or capture or how the mc is more comfortable with women after he wasn't a few chapters before, how he came to power, where that power is and came from. The pondering of such questions maybe too quickly solved almost as soon as they are brought up, but I like it. quickly establishing the MCs beliefs. Also aleast they are answered with a reasonable explanation(as far as reason goes in a novel). I like your Mc, endless potential for his power and character & story development. I Hope this gets better & continues to the natural ending & not another dropped novel on this site, cause for once I'm not entirely sure what that ending of this is!so many possibilities! That some how makes it a more interesting read. I guess I like peanut butter and banana sandwhichs now so...Good stuff. It's earned my power stones!

6yr
Dragonrage7
Dragonrage7Lv13

The story is and the mc has limitless potential.โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

6yr
Mafo
MafoLv5

Looks google translated from Chinese to me ........................................,,,...,,,,,,,........,,,,,,.....,,,,,,...,,,,(,,,,,,,).............:

6yr
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