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Me_is_Man
Me_is_ManLv56yr
2018-12-28 07:34

Story has good development but weird English and grammar. Like sometimes the author puts in words that don't fit the context of the sentence or he may make up terms for things in the MCU. Powers are promising and the story has good potential but I'd recommend maybe an editor. Heck, you can ask one of your readers for help with english as well.

Marvel Invincible Talisman

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4.0
121 Chs

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