Hey author here is some of my ideas you could add you could make an avatar for mc to be reborn into and do something in the mortal world of course it will ony be part of his original body that he can control subconsciously this way you will give as another POV that could be really interesting and maybe later on reaincarnte somebody form earth and maybe make him meet your avatar he should also make some fun planete like sci-fi and more the idea you got is good but its hard to make a story that is long for it you could also do some universal wars but do that later on when you get a bigger fan base. Another idea you could do is to mc original universe concur it then make a zombie apocalypse from it or magical apocalypse but make the world go back to time when mc died originaly and take his place there and just try to make it fun for him like a game and please do multiple pov's so that the story is not boring. Sorry for my bad english
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