Review Detail of shamalama in My Mini Planet

I can´t say anything to the stability of Updates or Story Development as of now, but the Story is really good. The Translation or writing is a bit bad tho. how instead of who when instead of went and many other mistakes at least in chapter 12. It´s not to the point where reading it becomes painful and the grammar is correct but it´s still annoying when you have to decrypt some sentences because the words aren´t right.